More than any other time in her life, a bride that is planning a wedding is writing a story.  For your marketing to be most effective the brides need to be able to identify a place for your products or services in their story.  The best way to make this happen is to tell a story with your marketing.  Go to your GonnaGetWed.com page.  Does your text only give dry details about the what, when, where, and how much of your business?  Consider rewriting the text to focus on why the bride should choose you.  Then move the other details into links that she can explore after she has bought into your offerings.

Which Reception Facility tells a story?  Which would you be more likely to call for an appointment? 

Our reception facility offers a wide variety of up lighting and a built-in sound system.  Up lights begin at just $25 each and gels can be made in every color to match your wedding.   A gel can even be created with your monogram.  Anything you can dream up, we can do.

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Imagine.  As the cocktail hour ends, a voice announces over the state-of-the-art sound system to find your seats.  “The party begins in T minus 2 minutes.”  Exactly two minutes later, the lights dim, and the colors of your wedding appear shooting from the floor up.  Spot lights start waiving as a fog machine gently ads to the sudden expectant ambiance.  The music starts.  The voice comes on, “Everyone, I’d like to address your attention to the main doors.  The moment you have been waiting for has arrived!  Get on your feet and welcome the new Mr. and Mrs. YOU!”  The curtains part.  The spots hit you and your husband as the music crescendos.  Your monogram is suddenly illuminated on the wall above the head table.  Balloons are released from the ceiling!  You enter in the most amazing party ever imagined, and the guest of honor is you!  Our reception facility has the experience, the facilities, and the equipment to make your dream reception a reality.

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